在家中creative writing

由於將近考試, 最近讓衡衡多做了一些creative writing的小練習, 是Mommy自己畫圖, 畫公仔等等 去引起小姐興趣去作文呢.  因為始終作文的成果非一朝一夕可以有修為, 還是要她以後要恆常練習為上.

以下這一篇是 衡衡最近在家中的練習, 給她四幅自畫繪圖, 又是公主題材, 她興奮得即時"詩興大作".   雖然文中有多處grammar上的mistakes, 但是只要多做, 有錯, 即改 便可以了. 
我照她所作的 "原文" 放上這裡:-



     In the morning, Princess Tanna leaves her castle.  She goes to the forest because she is lost.  She goes to the forest but anyone is not here, she is worrying and bored.

     Then there comes a voice, the voice is getting closer and closer, she feels happy because she thinks that people will help her.  Then she meet a witch, the witch asks "are you getting lost or hungry?"  "I am fine, thanks." Tanna says, "she is a good witch."

     The witch brings Tanna to her house.  There are so many foods.  The witch helps Tanna to cooks the dinner.  The witch says "go, go to eat." Tanna says "Oh, thank you!"

     In the next morning, Tanna was asleep under a tree.  In the palace of the girls are calling her to wake up, so she wakes up.  Finally, she finds that all the things happened was a dream.